Wolf Elaborative Writing

During writing we are working on elaborating.  Elaborating is when we stop the action of the story, zoom in on one moment and use our 5 senses to describe what is happening making the reader feel like they are "right there."   Listen to the wolf writing from your classmates.  How did each person elaborate?  What vivid verbs and adjectives did your friends use in their writing?  Check out our amazing writing by clicking the link below.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/7zgo5br7qpheljf/Wolf%20writing.mp4

Here's Kevin's wolf writing too!  It went missing when I downloaded the class's writing.  Sorry Kevin!